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alessandracapulet
view post Posted on 15/6/2004, 22:06




so...i guess here we can talk about poetry/the written word...if anyone is up for writing lyrics/stories thats great too! my two favorite things in the world are to write and to sing, so the connection between the two is a very happy place for me (for lack of better description!)

here is one of my favorite poems, that i wrote (i will post some more that i like that i didn't write as well)

living up to her name

Her name had been shortened
By well-meaning adults her entire life
Instead of calling her ‘Catherine’
She had always been ‘Cath’
Which suited her just as well.
But then more derivatives came along
Much to her chagrin
‘Kitty’ and ‘Cat’.
Her parents gave her such an important name
The name of queens
And saints
(Who have had their bodies broken by wheels).
Those in the past who have held her name
Have been brave (martyred)
And important.
But she is just Kitty
She shares a name with a domesticated animal.
A bar of Dove soap to accompany her
In her shower with Suave shampoo
(she knows the promise of extra shine
Will never be fulfilled).
She is thin enough
(she can only imagine the hell her life would be
if she was fat)
But her shadow figure
Is shrouded by too-big clothes
Which don’t bear the designer
Disclaimer her coworkers hold
In such high esteem.
When Kitty returns from work at night
She does not go out.
She curls up on her couch
(in a position not unlike the one
her adopted namesake is famous for)
And reminisces on a life
Of courage and strength
She knows she will never have.

 
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Loré
view post Posted on 16/6/2004, 09:59




beatiful......i haven't understand some words, but i will understand them with a dictionary......

maybe i, well my group, could music some of your poetry, could we?

i hope yes, you write so well!
 
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Loré
view post Posted on 16/6/2004, 10:18




ah, in the forum exist a section, "racconti", where we write our stories or other.....but they are in italian...sorry!

you could however visit the section....

Edited by Loré - 16/6/2004, 11:19
 
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Johnny Freak
view post Posted on 16/6/2004, 11:05




I liked this one more than the other one u lat me see some months ago...do u remember?!This one is really good...seriously....this is quite philosophic...like in the part u're talking about the fact that we have names as queens, saints, and animals too....i really liked this one....english poetry and the italian one are very very different anyway...i learned it now...
 
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alessandracapulet
view post Posted on 16/6/2004, 16:51




Thank you all for your very nice compliments! LPC Lore...(sorry don't have accento on my keyboard) yes i like this poem much better...the only reason i showed anyone the other poem is because it was the only one i could find on my computer at the time (i get really lazy about typing poetry) Lore (con accento) I will post some more stuff soon (once i type it) and you can tell me if you still like it! if you want to put music to my poetry (if you still like it) go for it! Who are some of y'all's (sorry no 'voi' form in english) favorite Italian poets/favorite poets in general? I LOVE sylvia plath, although she is quite depressing...
 
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Johnny Freak
view post Posted on 17/6/2004, 11:52




I don't have a favourite poet...I like to read all the poems i like and make my own poems on those poems' style
 
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Bad Intentioned
view post Posted on 17/6/2004, 12:05




I love Charles Baudelaire......i love his poetry!
 
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alessandracapulet
view post Posted on 20/6/2004, 23:06




have not yet read baudelaire
will make sure to do so!
 
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Bad Intentioned
view post Posted on 21/6/2004, 09:36




read him, he is fantastic!
 
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alessandracapulet
view post Posted on 29/6/2004, 21:58




Here is another one of my poems...my teacher liked it, but i don't really...I just don't have enough written! I am working on that though...have a lot of ideas.

Coppertone's Ghost
Her skin
Illuminated with the shine
Of the ghosts of suntans past
her eyes
Haunted by the errant reflection
Of boardwalks and ice cream men
But she has lost something
An intangible, wordless something
Buried too deep to touch
Like the seashell
At the heart of the sandcastle
They built together
Modeled after
The house he said
They would someday share
When summer finally succumbed
To autumn's pending hopelessness
He rode away on his wave
While she rumbled away
(An afterthought in her family's minivan)
Resigned to persevere
Through nine months of commitments
And deadlines
Propelled by the distant promise
Of paradise

 
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Bad Intentioned
view post Posted on 30/6/2004, 18:01




really nice!

i like it!
 
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Johnny Freak
view post Posted on 1/7/2004, 13:43




nice...the other one's better anyway...this is nice too but i don't know why but it has something less that the other...hummmm
 
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alessandracapulet
view post Posted on 1/7/2004, 16:23




I agree with you lore...it was kind of written quickly, when i was distracted...it feels hollow to me
 
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Johnny Freak
view post Posted on 1/7/2004, 20:14




i know that feeling...i feel it for a song i wrote...i'll show them to ya at camp..!
 
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alessandracapulet
view post Posted on 2/7/2004, 18:14




yayay! campy camp camp...only 15 days!!!
 
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